Gerard Manley Hopkins, selected poems Contents
- As Kingfishers Catch Fire
- Binsey Poplars
- The Blessed Virgin Mary Compared to the Air We Breathe
- Carrion Comfort
- Duns Scotus' Oxford
- God's Grandeur
- Harry Ploughman
- Henry Purcell
- Hurrahing in Harvest
- Inversnaid
- I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Synopsis of I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Commentary on I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Language and tone in I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Structure and versification in I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Imagery and symbolism in I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- Themes in I Wake and Feel the Fell of Dark
- The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Synopsis of The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Commentary on The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Language and tone in The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Structure and versification in The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Imagery and symbolism in The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- Themes in The Leaden Echo and the Golden Echo
- The May Magnificat
- My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Synopsis of My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Commentary on My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Language and tone in My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Structure and versification in My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Imagery and symbolism in My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- Themes in My Own Heart, Let Me Have More Pity On
- No Worst, There is None
- Patience, Hard Thing!
- Pied Beauty
- The Sea and the Skylark
- Spelt from Sibyl's Leaves
- Spring
- Spring and Fall
- St. Alphonsus Rodriguez
- The Starlight Night
- That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire and of the Comfort of the Resurrection
- Synopsis of That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Commentary on That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Language and tone in That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Structure and versification in That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Imagery and symbolism in That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Themes in That Nature is a Heraclitean Fire
- Thou Art Indeed Just, Lord
- Tom's Garland
- To Seem the Stranger
- To What Serves Mortal Beauty
- The Windhover
- The Wreck of the Deutschland
- Beauty and its purpose
- The beauty, variety and uniqueness of nature
- Christ's beauty
- Conservation and renewal of nature
- God's sovereignty
- The grace of ordinary life
- Mary as a channel of grace
- Nature as God's book
- Night, the dark night of the soul
- Serving God
- Suffering and faith
- The temptation to despair
- The ugliness of modern life
- Understanding evil in a world God has made
Structure and versification in Henry Purcell
The extended sonnet
This section has necessarily to be quite technical:
- the basic sonnet form consists of lines written in iambic pentameter, the five feet usually generating some 10-11 syllables.
- Hopkins' way of extending the sonnet is to push the line length out, using six or more stresses and a number of extra unstressed syllables
- these either do not count in the scansion or, if they do, give rise to all sorts of other feet besides iambic, such as anapaestic, dactylic or even paeonic
- thus the line can contain anything from 12-19 syllables.
Hexameters?
Usually a 12-syllable line is called an alexandrine, and it is the typical measure of French poetry. Arranged into iambic feet, it is more often called in English verse an iambic hexameter. However:
- Hopkins' use of the iambic becomes increasingly relaxed
- the line length goes way beyond twelve syllables too, so the term alexandrine is also inaccurate.
So we run out of classifications. Hopkins' own markings are not always helpful, either, as he sometimes fails to put stresses on syllables that have to be stressed, however we read the line.
Let's look at a few examples:
- 1.5 seems to consist of 13 syllables, so is basically an alexandrine
- stresses have to fall on ‘mood', ‘mean-', ‘fire', ‘sac-', and ‘fear'
- ‘him' would seem to need a stress to keep up what would then be a fairly regular iambic rhythm
- ‘proud' seems to demand a stress from its meaning, though Hopkins does not intend it to
- Hopkins discounts the ‘-ing' of ‘meaning' from the scansion, thus making ‘proud' have an unstressed syllable to give an iambic foot (proud fíre)
- The other thing about an alexandrine is that it usually has a caesura or break halfway through the line, as here, after ‘meaning'. Yet Hopkins was suspicious of alexandrines, thinking they settled down into a very inflexible sort of verse, the exact opposite of what he wanted!
Alliterative patterns
The alliterations are clearly placed in each line. Traditional alliterative poetry tends to use caesurae for its patterning: two alliterations in the first part of the line, one in the second. Hopkins still keeps an ear for that, but, with so much else going on, it is more difficult to catch this pattern than in some of the earlier poems.
Enjambement and counterpointing
Exactly half the lines use enjambement (run-over lines), including every single line of the first tercet. If we look at l.9, we see that its flow is interrupted by two exclamations. In fact, if we take all the pauses, we could easily think we are reading four lines rather than three. This leads to the equivalent of a syncopated rhythm.
- Read line a through a number of times, to get the best rhythm for it.
- How many stresses and pauses do you end up with?
- Try working out the scansion and rhythm of l.13.
- Would you say the sonnet eventually loses its sense of shape?
- Or does it still feel a well-structured sonnet to you?
- Would you say that just too much is going on, both technically and in terms of what is being said?
- Or does it feel as if Hopkins still basically knows what he is doing?
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